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[justify]did you remember that day ?[/justify]

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when you was sleep

were sleeping
in the dark dark night

when you was dream by beautiful sight
were dreaming

did you remember that sound ?
which was sing the song of the night
was singing

and you was listen to it
were listening
then, say please again say it

you was walk slowly between the grass
and say .. may I will see it
.... were walking
on the grass

did you remember that man
who was stand near the moon in that night
was standing under the moon that night

and he was rider his horse
was riding
going to the land of the white
going to white land

you wish if you go with him
to go with
tell me if I am wrong or right

do not be shy like this
i will tell you who i am

I am
the man who was sing
was singing
the song of the night



with my pen

written by Hasanنقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
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